Grim - Worst Morning Ever okay, ... lets try some higher quality guitar.
For me, as i also have been trying comparable sngs, as a complete seems compatible, happy, nice lenght. I thing good basis. As for composition from amateur point of view it is pretty ok. But as im more having good time with sound itself rather then with making a usable song or loop, i was a bit interrupted by the kind of lofi guitar sound. You attempted to make a chords with really awful guitar tone. A can just try to advise about using rather some soundfont of guitar chords which exist and i used them and i can really imagine that the complete sound look might be a class better with that. Just thinking loud, not saying im totally true, just try some of these, youll see though....